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Clothes Shopping
Mrs. Smith went shopping yesterday. She wanted to buy a new dress and a present for her son. She looked at many different dresses. She did not like the yellow dress or the blue dress. She decided to buy a red dress. She paid about 200 dollars for it. She did not know what to buy her son. She looked at some sweaters, shirts, and pants. She looked at a new soccer ball, but she didnt buy it. Instead, Mrs. Smith bought her son a new watch.
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jeff
jeff
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2008-06-02 15:06:09Kat
Hen hao, Jeff! Just be sure to pronounce the whole word. For example, with the word "dresses," you said "dress," so be sure to add the "es" at the end of the word. Also with "decided," be sure to pronounce the last 'D' sound so that listeners know you are speaking in the past tense. Keep up the good work!Rate This Review
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2008-06-03 09:43:11cassie
You did a good job,but pay attention to your pronounce, you should proun the word clearly and perfectly, besides, pay more attention to your sentence, you begin with "she" in each sentence, it seems too tedious!Rate This Review 0 0 -
2008-06-03 13:35:14Lemonades
不错！只要注意dresses 的发音。加油！Rate This Review 0 0
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