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Transportation
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
Author:
MR Emad
MR Emad
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You wrote " i, take some dress"
always use I instead of "i" when you are writting about yourself. Try to provide more details on what do you take when you go on vacation. In other words, more stuff.
thank you