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Professions
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
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RITA
RITA
On my desk are the stack of books,my computer and printer, in the drawers there are papers, pens and notebook.
Submitted: 2008-06-03 21:57:16
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On my desk, there is a stack of books, my computer and a printer. In the drawers, there are papers, pens and a notebook.
Your job is well done.
Just a comment: There is a stack...., a computer and a printer ( you don't need to tell "my", because it is said in the begining).