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Pertenencias de las personas

Using one positive and one negative attribute, describe six people (a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you, and me) and the items they have. Ex. The woman’s coins are silver. They are not gold.

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Aravind
Soy lived casa.Es anciana,blanco and pleura color es maroon.La arbols y flors are there.....
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Submitted: 2008-06-04 07:22:56



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  • 2008-06-04 12:50:32
    Ihatefalsehood!
    Sorry, but i think you made a babel tour in this submission. But don't give up!
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  • 2008-06-04 19:12:44
    @#@$^%$
    Hi Aravind!
    Let me TRY to help you with this sentence;

    Yo viví en una casa vieja, su color era blanco y sus puertas estaban pintadas de color marón. Tenia arboles y flores.


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  • 2008-06-04 20:25:15
    maria
    incorrecto Vivo e una casa antigua blanca y marron Los arboles y flores que hay alli .
    Mezcla ingles y castellano y no conjuga verbos incorrecto
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  • 2008-06-04 22:12:29
    @#@$^%$
    Hi Maria,

    Lived is past tense. Consequently, is ( Yo viví)
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  • 2008-06-05 00:35:44
    Ihatefalsehood!
    Yes. Lived is in the past tense of regilar verbs.
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  • 2008-06-05 00:37:25
    Ihatefalsehood!
    sorry, regular verbs.
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  • 2008-06-06 13:31:34
    clauchu
    ??????
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  • 2008-06-16 14:43:28
    Rosy
    Tienes algunos errores, pero no te preocupes que con practica vas a mejorar.. Debias haber escrito algo asi:
    Vivi en una casa vieja, de color blanca. Tenia una puerta marron y un jardin con arboles y flores.-
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  • 2008-06-22 23:21:09
    Lilia
    Está bien la corrección de Rosy
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