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What are people going to do?

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is buying flowers.

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demi
Today is Sunday of Jun 8,2008. It is Dragon Boat Festival. I wish all the teachers happy hoildays.
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Submitted: 2008-06-08 14:08:32



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  • 2008-06-08 15:17:42
    Eliz
    Good try Demi! You may write also this way: ' Today is Sunday, June the 8th, 2008.  It is Dragon Boat Festival Day and I wish all the teachers a happy holiday!'
    I also wish you a happy holiday and I hope you enjoy eating the 'zongzi'.  I ate some this afternoon.
    Cheers
    Eliz
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