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demi
It is 21:30 at night, i was learning english. 30 minutes after is the 22:00pm. I am prepared to end a learning courses. Two hours before the 19:00pm, I was with colleagues outside with dinner. Thank you, teachers! I wish you have a good eveyday! demi
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Submitted: 2008-06-09 13:35:39



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  • 2008-06-10 04:46:47
    Eliz
    Good try Demi, you may also write in this way:
    ' It is 21h30 and I am learning English.  In thirty minutes it will be 22h00.  I almost finish my English course.  Two hours before it was 19h00 and I was eating out with my colleagues.

    Thank you teachers! I wish you all a good day!
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