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Describing People

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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Sweety
Hi, I know a person who is an special for me, this is my mother. She is a good person, has a good feelings too, also she is very sincere. She is thin and not too older woman. I love her so much, sometimes I used to call her because she lives in Chile and all my family is there too. Her Heart is too rich because has a lot of love to give me.
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Submitted: 2008-06-14 02:21:42



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  • 2008-06-30 15:19:14
    The Enthusiast
    Excellent.  Couple minor corrections.  "...has good feelings and is also very sincere.  She is thin and not too old.  I love her very much;  sometimes used to call her because she lives in Chile.  All my family is in there too.  Her heart is too rich..."
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