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Describing Objects

Describe (with positive and negative attributes) the objects you learned about in this lesson. Ex. These flowers are not red. They are blue.

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Sweety
well, my little gipsy died four years ago, she lived 13 years with us, she was so beautiful, intelligent, she was a "Podle Toy". she went to visit my family in Chile, she was liketo my dougther. always loved her and remembered.
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Submitted: 2008-06-14 05:00:23



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  • 2008-07-17 18:42:36
    ambroise
    Your writing is understandable.  A few words are spelled incorrectly.  There is an English word:  gypsy.  Maybe your dog had this name or as you spell it. Your text:  "Well, my little gipsy died four years ago.  She lived 13 years with us and was very beautiful and intelligent.  Gipsy was a 'toy poodle' by breed.  Once, she went to visit my family in Chile.  She was like a daughter to me.  I always loved her and remember her often." 
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