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描述物体
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
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afridi@china
afridi@china
zhaoshan wuo qu wuo de gon sa.wuo you hen do sa qeen. wuo shy,wuo kan shou. wan san wuo zai yi qee wuo de pen you.
Yesterday morning i went to my office.i have to do many things there.writing ,reading. In the evening i stay together with my friends.
Submitted: 2008-06-14 07:34:44
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Yesterday morning i went to my office.i have to do many things there.writing ,reading. In the evening i stay together with my friends
i=wo
office=ban gong shi
many=hen duo
thing=shi qing
writing=xie zi
book=shu
in the evening=wan shang
together=yiqi
friend=pengyou
In the evening i stay together with my friends.=wan shang wo he wo de pengyou zai yiqi
ji xu nu li
Firstly,some words."wuo"should be "wo","do"shoule be "duo",etc.
and you'd better tell differences between"z"and"zh","an"and"ang",and the word "morning"should be written as"zao shang"in Chinese.
Secondly,the correct order of your last sentence should be"wan shang wo he wo de pengyou zai yiqi",because in Chinese we got the pattern"Subject+another Subject+Predicate "and"zai yiqi"is kinda Predicate in our Chinese sentence.
Finally,the right expression should be"zaoshang wo qu le wo de gong si,wo you hen duo shiqing.wo yao kan wenjian xie baogao.wanshang wo he wo de pengyou zai yiqi"and in Chinese it's"早上我去了我的公司,我有很多事情,我要看文件,写报告.晚上我和我的朋友在一起"
as old as you.you can use 你you did areally good job.come on!