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Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
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geralive
geralive
我的书桌上有我的电脑,手机,几张音乐光盘和软件光盘, 一些硬件, 圆珠笔,铅笔,等等.在我的书桌附近还有一个小书桌 ,小书桌上有我的笔记本和中文书, 在我的后面有我喜爱的沙发,沙发旁是我的床, 床的对面有我的电视机和我的Nintendo Wii.
Submitted: 2008-06-16 05:14:46
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