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Clothes Shopping

Mrs. Smith went shopping yesterday. She wanted to buy a new dress and a present for her son. She looked at many different dresses. She did not like the yellow dress or the blue dress. She decided to buy a red dress. She paid about 200 dollars for it. She did not know what to buy her son. She looked at some sweaters, shirts, and pants. She looked at a new soccer ball, but she didnt buy it. Instead, Mrs. Smith bought her son a new watch.

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Chynna
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Submitted: 2008-06-18 20:13:56



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  • 夕阳美/April
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    Excellent !
    I like to listen to it very much.
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    2008-06-20 05:56:33 Report abuse
  • dip
    Speaks:  Bengali (Native)
    Hello chynna , your submission is well.
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    2008-06-20 14:46:35 Report abuse
  • Ayten
    Speaks:  Arabic (Native), English (Fluent), French (Intermediate), Spanish (Beginner)
    Good work.
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    2008-06-20 14:51:49 Report abuse
  • dream
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    well done
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    2008-06-22 14:14:00 Report abuse
  • woshiwenzy
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    Your voice sounds like a young woman, very soft and tender.
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    2008-06-26 10:53:15 Report abuse
  • hsjhyr
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    Hello!
    You did a pefect job!
    Thanks for your help!
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    2008-06-26 12:40:28 Report abuse
  • Lingvo_Amato
    Speaks:  Indonesian (Native), English (Intermediate)
    Good effort!
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    2008-06-28 17:20:27 Report abuse
  • JB
    Speaks:  Portuguese (Brazil) (Native), English (Fluent), French (Intermediate), German (Beginner)
    Excellent!
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    2008-06-30 01:26:24 Report abuse
  • lvy
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    Thank you for doing a very good job .
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    2008-07-15 08:19:28 Report abuse
  • oldzhu
    Speaks:  Mandarin Chinese (Native)
    Is preposition "for" omitted in the sentense--Mrs Smith bought (for) son a new watch, or is simply  unneccessary. Thanks.
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    2008-07-19 02:22:33 Report abuse
  • Kejope
    Speaks:  English (Native)
    Very good.  I can understand you well.
    Some of your individual words would sound much better if you cut away some of the consonant sounds.  For example:  in "went shopping" and "different dresses," the "t" should be very soft.

    Pretend that you are not allowed to say the full "t" sound; you are allowed to say half of the "t" sound, but then you must hold your tongue still and hold your breath for a moment.  Then, you must continue without completing the "t" sound, like this:  "wenT"  "went"  "went shopping"  "differenT"  "different"  "different dresses"  (I tap the microphone while I hold my breath.)

    Now I will read the text:
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    2008-07-19 05:05:57 Report abuse
  • Juan Do
    Speaks:  Spanish (Native), English (Fluent), French (Intermediate), Japanese (Intermediate)
    you eated a lot of words, and the ones you eated, you put them in were they don't have to go, keep an eye on that
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    2008-07-28 00:28:03 Report abuse

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