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Les biens des personnes

Using one positive and one negative attribute, describe six people (a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you, and me) and the items they have. Ex. The woman’s coins are silver. They are not gold.

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cgibbs
Ma premiere maison etait nouveau. La couleur est blanc. La porte est brun. Il etait un petit jardin avec fleurs.
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Submitted: 2008-06-18 20:26:07



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  • 2008-06-19 11:45:38
    Tiresias
    "neuve" "etait" ==>past action
    "la porte etait brune (feminin) "Il y avait un....avec des fleurs"
    Super ,c est un bon début!!!
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