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描述物体及其位置

Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

wo shi yi ge ma ma khu khu ren. wo de tou fa hey se de.wo de tou fa shao de .wo me you kushi he kuzi.
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Submitted: 2008-06-19 05:52:56



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  • 2008-06-19 06:25:36
    nancy_bj2008
    1. ma ma hu hu + ren , this pattern means this person is careless, if you want to say you are a common guy you can say "yi4 ban1 ren2"
    2. wo de tou fa shi he se de, here you have lost "shi"
    3.wo de tou fa shao, you do not need "de" here
    4. the last sentence, i'm sorry, I can not understand
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  • 2008-06-19 06:52:10
    玥玓瓅
    "我是一个马马乎乎的人,我的头发是黑色的,我的头发少,我没有……“
    ”马马乎乎“="ma ma hu hu"  "he se"=“黑色”    ”没“=”mei"
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  • 2008-06-19 08:13:27
    jimmy
    wo shi yi ge ma ma hu hu de ren. wo de tou fa shi hei se de.wo de tou fa  hen shao.wo me you  hu zi.
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  • 2008-06-19 11:26:19
    lee
    wo shi ge ma ma hu de ren.wo de tou fa shi hei se de .wo de tou fa hen shao .wo mei you hu zi .我是个马马虎虎的人,我的头凡是黑色的,我的头发很少,我没有胡子。
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  • 2008-06-19 11:26:46
    lee
    Go on !!!
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  • 2008-07-17 07:46:46
    悠悠
    good!
    wo shi yi ge ma ma hu hu de ren.wo de tou fa shi hei se de. wo de tou fa duan .wo mei you hu zi.
    not "shao","duan"is right.
    shao(少)=few,small number,
    duan(短)=short,^^
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  • 2008-10-15 02:45:39
    windy
    wo shi yi ge ma ma hu hu de ren,wo de tou fa shi hei se de ,wo de tou fa shao .wo mei you hu zi .
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  • 2008-11-11 04:23:38
    summer
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    ma ma khu khu -  should be "ma ma hu hu" and "ma ma hu hu de ren"

    hey - should be hei and you also need "shi" just like your first sentence. So it should be "wo de tou fa shi hei se de".

    What's "kushi he kuzi"? Is " kuzi" pants? What's "kushi"?
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