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People’s Possessions

Using one positive and one negative attribute, describe six people (a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you, and me) and the items they have. Ex. The woman’s coins are silver. They are not gold.

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princess
the building is brow, the building is new, the building is red, the door is white, don´t have garden
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Submitted: 2008-06-20 02:35:51



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  • 2008-06-27 13:40:17
    huwdude87
    Just a typing error you probably accidentaly did.......the building is BROWN.

    Try and group colours together like......The building is brown and red, its new. The door is white and i dont have a garden.

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