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What can and can’t they do?

Write a list of rules using the vocabulary from this lesson. EX. 1. You can’t smoke in the park. 2. You can park at the restaurant but not at the library.

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kasreen
my favorite food to eat is fish.my favorite drink is water only.
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Submitted: 2008-07-02 22:49:46



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  • Ana Caroline
    Speaks:  Portuguese (Brazil) (Native)
    Hey guy...

    "My favorite food is fish"

    Everything is ok!
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    2008-07-02 22:54:27 Report abuse
  • Ximena Castillo
    Speaks:  Spanish (Native), English (Advanced), Italian (Intermediate)
    My favorite food is fish!!!  good job!! :)
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    2008-07-02 22:57:43 Report abuse
  • Alfredo Camacho...
    Speaks:  Spanish (Advanced)
    You can say:

    My favorite food is fish and my favorite drink is just water.

    The word "only" is not necessarily incorrect. But, I would use just instead of only.
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    2008-07-02 23:00:32 Report abuse
  • dyana
    Speaks:  Portuguese (Brazil) (Native)
    good!!
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    2008-07-02 23:00:45 Report abuse
  • basak
    Speaks:  Turkish (Native), English (Advanced)
    okay but don' you think these sentences are a little short. Try to compose a little bit longer sentences. :)
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    2008-07-02 23:18:26 Report abuse
  • Sarita
    Speaks:  Portuguese (Brazil) (Native)
    Hello  My favorite food is fish!

    Very Good!!!
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    2008-07-03 00:35:46 Report abuse
  • larissantiago
    Speaks:  Portuguese (Brazil) (Native)
    i ws waitinnn a BIG text!
    :P
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    2008-07-04 00:29:38 Report abuse
  • Jasmine
    Speaks:  Farsi (Native), English (Intermediate)
    Welldone Kasreen ,Water is the best drink.
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    2008-07-04 11:07:49 Report abuse
  • Jumana
    Speaks:  Arabic (Native)
    My favorite meal is fish and my favorite beverage is water.
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    2008-07-13 20:16:12 Report abuse

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