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What are you wearing?

Describe what you are wearing.

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Tanya
By my watch it is twenty minutes past one in the morning. It is late... In 30 min it will be 10 minutes to one in the morning, 2 hours ago it was twenty minutes past eleven in the evening. or It's 20 minutes past one am. In 30 minutes it will be 10 minutes to nine am, 2 hours ago it was 20 minutes past eleven p.m. or It's 1:20 am, in 30 minutes it will be 1:50 am, two hours ago it was 1:20 pm.
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Submitted: 2008-07-04 20:12:41



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  • 2008-07-05 01:05:09
    Jon
    Hello Tanya. The first one looks the best. It is the way I would write it.
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  • 2008-07-06 14:45:19
    MPR82
    Yeah, I would normally say either '1:20 am' or 'twenty past one in the morning'.
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