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人们要做什么?

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is buying flowers.

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jiayou
What's the date today? It's Friday,July18,2008.
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Submitted: 2008-07-18 14:44:43



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  • 2008-07-18 14:33:11
    felix
    July 18 应是18th
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  • 2008-07-18 14:34:47
    Mary123
    It`s very good!
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  • 2008-07-18 21:34:30
    Dancing Bear
    It's perfect.  The only thing I would add is one blank space after each comma before starting another word or a number. That's what we are taught to do.
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