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人们要做什么?
Using both positive and negative attributes, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is buying flowers.
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jiayou

jiayou
What's the date today?
It's Friday,July18,2008.
Submitted: 2008-07-18 14:44:43
Reviews
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2008-07-18 14:33:11felix
July 18 应是18th -
2008-07-18 14:34:47Mary123
It`s very good! -
2008-07-18 21:34:30Dancing Bear
It's perfect. The only thing I would add is one blank space after each comma before starting another word or a number. That's what we are taught to do.
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