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Vacation transportation

When was the last time that you went on a vacation? Did you go by car, airplane or ship? Where did you go?

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I have a friend who aren't too serious .She is a good sence of humor.She has a little a fat but tall.She has a factory which too big is steel factory ,Small is clothes factory.She is very kind and she usually help poor person. She always make laught to every staff who work her factory.

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Submitted: 2008-07-20 12:06:43

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2008-07-22 11:18:34
kelley

I have a friend who ISN'T (singular) too serious. She HAS a good sense of humor. ( it is not proper to talk about people being fat)

This exercise is supposed to be talking about vacation transportation.

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