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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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ana
I´m in gandia´s beach I stay here since july first and came back to Madrid on agust first.
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Submitted: 2008-07-21 08:37:30



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  • 2008-07-28 19:39:37
    jacqui
    Hi Ana,
    I believe that gandia should be capitalised i.e. Gandia's, I have been here since July first and go back (or return) to Madrid on Auguste first.  In English we have capitals for names and months unlike in your language.
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