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Describing Objects

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative attributes. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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There are five dogs. Four dogs are black. One dog is not black. It is light brown. There are seven candles. Three candles are red. The other four candles is not red, they have a diferent colour. Two from their are orange and two are yellow.

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Submitted: 2008-07-22 18:01:03

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2008-07-23 19:22:39
jeffbrant1

Gereat 3 .... In the second paragraph. The other four candles ARE not red, they are a different color. Two of them are orange.......

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2008-07-23 21:36:53
Lena

Thank you Jeff.

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