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描述人

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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Erena
那个男人很瘦，个子很高。 这个男孩很胖，个子很矮。 那个女孩很年轻，个子不矮。 这个女人上年纪，不胖。 你很亲切，不瘦。 我的个子很高，不胖。
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Submitted: 2008-07-25 17:59:56



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  • 2008-07-25 19:25:52
    张浩文
    真棒！ 你的中文很好啊！ 加油！  :)
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  • 2008-07-26 04:19:23
    Shin
    wow,good job!!
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  • 2008-07-27 11:58:13
    sunny
    keep  studying  chinese!
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  • 2008-07-27 12:09:41
    sophie0830
    很不錯呢！加油喔！
    ^--^
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  • 2008-07-28 01:44:27
    Chynna
    Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! Unit 1-1 and 2 provide the sample Chinese vocabulary. You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters. Your writing is concise, fluent， beautiful, perfect  and comprehensible. I really enjoy your description.  You may also get benefits from other helpful comments and your friend team. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up.  Best wishes to you！

    非常好! 您能用汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内外的知识，创造中文句子。您的文字简明，流利，容易理解，完美，漂亮。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您。继续努力！向您祝贺
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  • 2008-07-29 14:41:38
    Dean Fulcher
    Very good.
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