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Describing Hairstyles

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Luciane
The woman has short hair. She has not long hair. The man is short. He is not tall. The girl is fat.She is not thin. The boy has dark hair. He is not blond.You are beautiful. you are not ugly. I am short, I am not tall.
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Submitted: 2008-07-26 16:06:55



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  • 2008-07-27 00:57:54
    Ray
    Very good!  Just one structure comment.

    She does not have long hair.
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    She doesn't have long hair.
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  • 2008-11-02 01:03:06
    Izabel
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    Quando tu usar a frase no negativo, acho que só aquela com verbo "to be" tu não usa o "to do" como auxiliar.
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