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Describing Objects

Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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lisa-s
The flowers is on the table,the candy is in the box ,the cup is on the table ,the pen is on the table ,and so on .
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Submitted: 2008-07-27 13:17:59



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  • 2008-09-26 11:38:15
    Paul
    Lisa,
    Almost perfect.  Note the first sentence:
    The flowers is on the table.
    Flowers = plural (not single)
    If the subject is plural, the BE verb is 'are'.
    The flowers are on the table.
    BE is the most difficult verb in English, and you must be careful to pay close attention to the subject of the sentence.  Chinese verbs don't change, so checking the subject and changing the verb are new habits you must develop.
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