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What are people going to do?

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is buying flowers.

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Pris
I'm doing some exercises. The girl is watching a soap-opera on television. The man is nagging. My dog is howling. The ghost is coming. You're helping me to improve my English. Thank you.
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Submitted: 2008-07-27 13:59:37



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  • 2008-07-27 15:04:24
    Naomi
    "You're helping me improve my English."
    The 'to' is not necessary and this sounds more natural. ;) Very good!
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  • 2008-07-27 17:17:43
    tyra16
    very good work.

    you could have tryed to use some more sentences..
    with:
    man , woman girl-boy.
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    very nice keep on doing that.
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  • 2008-07-30 02:13:20
    Chynna
    Well done!
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  • 2008-09-14 18:30:11
    nerminfgr
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