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Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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aileen405
该名女子是十分渺茫和非常大。该名男子是厚和智能。该名男童是年轻，是永远是安静。该名女童是小和正迅速成为恼火。他们是很聪明和发明。我一个小女孩，和不耐烦了。
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Submitted: 2008-07-29 09:31:30



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  • 2008-07-29 10:34:03
    Anny
    有些地方写得不对。 你有时间的时侯可以问我。
    （there is some mistake.  Feel free to contact me, i will help you. 
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  • 2008-07-29 10:48:30
    飞泉流瀑
    “该名男童是年轻”改为这个孩子很小
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  • 2008-07-29 10:50:20
    cynthia
    你的中文，语法有问题。一个女人个子很高。一个男人很聪明。一个男孩很年轻，很文静。一个女孩很幼小，但是很烦人。......
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  • 2008-07-29 10:51:38
    bigfish
    ^_^，加油！
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  • 2008-07-29 11:13:19
    pangl
    渺茫不能形容人,非常大也不是形容人的.请注意形容词的用法.
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  • 2008-07-29 11:48:10
    №Finola ♀蓝色艺幽★︿...
    照你的意思就是 女子是渺茫和大 男子是厚 ?这些词都应用形容词  比如说该女子是渺茫的. 该男子是智能的.男童是年轻的.  注意哦!
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  • 2008-07-29 12:08:33
    liuhui8822715
    you can speak guangdong ,where are you from ?learn chinese I can help you .I come from china .
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  • 2008-07-29 12:32:26
    zzhmls
    You work hard. Your exercise is good. but some words are not fitter.
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    这名女子十分神秘, 个子很高大。那名男子有点胖,但是很有智慧。这个男孩年轻，永远都很安静。那个女孩很小,正在发火。他们都很聪明。我是一个小女孩，有时不太耐心。
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