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Describing Objects

Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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sascia
The dishes, glasses and cutlery are on the table: the table is layed for five. The books, notebooks, pens, pencil and calculator are on the big table. The computer is on a small table next to that big. The wood screws are in the white small box on the table. The screwdriver is in the toolbox at the foot of the table. The old book that you are searching is in the red box in the storage basement.
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Submitted: 2008-07-29 18:29:27



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  • 2008-07-29 19:04:10
    Noa
    Good. (on the small table) The wood screws are in the white small box, and the screwdriver is in the toolbox.
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  • 2008-07-29 20:11:47
    Millery
    table is SET for five
    next to THE BIG ONE
    small white
    searching FOR
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  • 2008-07-30 00:48:59
    Ana
    Hi sacia: 1. What do you mean "is layed for five" ?  2.,,,,pencils and calculators.... 3. ...next to the big one.  Continue being a good student !
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  • 2008-08-18 00:11:50
    colabama
    dear sascia,please say 'the old book you are searching for is in the red box in the storage basement' your work is visibly improving.best wishes,marie
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