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Describing Objects and their Locations

Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

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sascia
The woman is in the blue car, not in the red truck. The mason is on the spiral staircase inside the building. He is not on the building's roof. The book you are searching is on the third shelf of the library. The toiletries are on the second shelf of the four rack in the fifth aisle. Your car is on the second floor of the tower parking, at the left of the elevator, in second row.
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Submitted: 2008-07-29 18:53:36



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  • 2008-07-29 20:16:45
    Millery
    searching FOR - in most languages the FOR in incorporated into the verb, but not in English
    fourTH shelf
    parking GARAGE
    THE second row

    Who is tending to the olives?
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  • 2008-07-30 01:04:58
    Ana
    Hi sascia . 1. searching for or looking for is ok.
    2. fourth shelf.  3. parking garage. 4. in the second row.  ok, you're doing well !
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  • 2008-08-05 10:58:37
    Glo1949
    Hi Sascia,
    Normally we would say "multi storey car park" instead of "parking tower" Otherwise, I agree with Millery and Ana, excellent work!
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  • 2008-09-23 16:35:22
    Noa
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    Well done dear teacher! I'm agree with native speakers.  You have very difficult submission. You are really very clever teacher.
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