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Going on Vacation
Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
Author:
almhb
almhb
Vacation it is like dream to me now, I'll get my vacation at January my plan go to England or Cyprus Islands for enjoy, meet some friends, and know this area.
Submitted: 2008-07-31 00:41:38
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I am going on vacation in January. I plan to either go to England or Cyprus where I will meet some friends, have a good time and get to know the area. Very good though.
Just there are some mistakes: "Vacation like a dream .", "I will go at January to England or Cyprus Islands...".
Good luck!