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Weekly Routines

What are your weekly routines? Are there things you do everyday? Every week? Every other week? How often?

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hierbafresca
I go to work every day using my car or my motorcycle , I also spend two or 3 hours a day studdying English.I rarely go out of my house during the weekend exept when I go shopping.
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Submitted: 2008-08-02 17:23:41



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  • 2008-08-02 19:14:49
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    Hola Hierbafresca,

    Buen trabajo.  Sigue derecho.

    "I go to work everyday by car or motorcycle.  I spend 2 to 3 hours a day studying English.  I rarely go out of my house on weekends except to go shopping."
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  • 2008-08-03 01:14:21
    Eugenio
    Very good. I would suggest that you either say " 2 or 3 hours a day" or "two or three hours a day".  Mixingt numerals with word form numbers is unusual.  The spelling is "studying" not 'studdying". 
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  • 2008-08-03 03:22:50
    inger
    I agree it should be 2 to 3 hours (or two to three hours) - and studying has only one d.  Good work
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  • 2008-08-15 23:13:16
    William
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    Very good.  I agree with the previous comments.
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