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Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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Lee Kong
这个女人年纪小和高。 The woman is young and tall. 这个男人年纪小和高。 The man is young and tall. 这个男孩年纪小和高。 The boy is young and tall. 这个女孩年纪小和高。 The girl is young and tall. 你年纪小和高。 You are young and tall. 我年纪小和高。 I am young and tall.
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Submitted: 2008-08-03 07:57:57



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  • 2008-08-03 08:21:29
    fhytree
    这个女人年纪小但却很高.
    The woman is young and tall
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  • 2008-08-03 08:27:42
    turgun
    这个女人年纪小和高。
    The woman is young and tall.  《《=错
    应该是:这个女人年轻又个子高
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  • 2008-08-03 08:34:18
    玥玓瓅
    I agree with  turgun's suggestions.
    ”年纪小“=“年轻”
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  • 2008-08-03 08:34:51
    Anny
    good.
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  • 2008-08-03 08:35:16
    xhuang3269
    很好!
    建议: 把"年纪小和高" 改为 "很年轻,个子很高"会更好一些。
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  • 2008-08-03 08:43:59
    何雅琴
    很好呀!
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  • 2008-08-03 10:55:32
    悠然
    "和"在这里使用得不好!翻译成中文很生硬!你可以用"又"或者"却"来代替“和”
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  • 2008-08-03 13:04:57
    lili
    i think you can try to say in some other ways,not only one,ok?
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  • 2008-08-09 08:11:16
    林静怡
    很好哦.女人,男人形容年纪可以用"年轻"女孩,男孩可以用"年纪小"可以说成"这个女人年轻而高"....
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  • 2008-09-10 10:11:33
    wqflysy
    这名女子不仅年轻,而且很高.
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