Review Member Submissions - Writing

Your Family

Describe your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters? Are they older or younger?

I have a sister, she is fourteen years older than me. I have three child, two girls and a boy. They are twenty six, twenty two and twenty one
Average Score:
Submit Your Own
Submitted: 2008-08-03 15:17:57



Reviews

  • 2008-08-03 15:48:59
    Lynne
    I have three CHILDREN
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0
  • 2008-08-04 12:22:45
    anita
    child (singular)
    children (plural)
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0
  • 2008-08-05 01:38:56
    Bigi
    I have a sister, she is fourteen years older than me.
    In this sentence you can use either a conjunction to join the two sentences 'and' or you can use a semicolon between sister and she.
    I have three child, two girls and a boy. They are twenty six, twenty two and twenty one
    Use  a hyphen with numbers twenty-two, twenty-one etc.
    (Do your children speak English?)
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0
  • 2008-08-05 17:00:06
    Nicole Lyn
    Very good!  Possible corrections:

    I have a sister; she is fourteen years older than me.
    I have three children: two girls and a boy. They are twenty-six, twenty-two and twenty-one, respectively.

    (If you have a question about "respectively" please send me a message)
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0
  • 2008-08-11 19:14:57
    Millery
    three children
    twenty-six, twenty-two and twenty-one
    You must be an old guy (LOL)!
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0
  • 2008-08-31 16:36:11
    melvyn
    Average rating:
    HI I AGREE WITH THE COMMENTS BELOW
    MELVYN
    Rate This Review
    Login to cast your vote. 0
    Login to cast your vote. 0

More Submissions by carles mercader

Other Members' Submissions