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A Shopping Trip

The boys are shopping for plants and flowers today. The girl is going shopping next week. She is going to buy a necklace. The man is trying on sunglasses in the mirror. The woman is buying a skirt and getting money from her purse.

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Submitted: 2008-09-04 03:29:21



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  • 2008-08-05 14:01:24
    Marek
    Perfect.
    I have a very fany limeric for you:
    There was a young lady of Niger
    Who smiled as she rode on a tiger;
    They returned from the ride
    With the lady inside,
    And the smile on the face of the tiger
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  • 2008-08-05 14:01:46
    Marek
    Perfect.
    I have a very fany limeric for you:
    There was a young lady of Niger
    Who smiled as she rode on a tiger;
    They returned from the ride
    With the lady inside,
    And the smile on the face of the tiger
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  • 2008-08-05 14:02:07
    Marek
    Perfect.
    I have a very fany limeric for you:
    There was a young lady of Niger
    Who smiled as she rode on a tiger;
    They returned from the ride
    With the lady inside,
    And the smile on the face of the tiger
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  • 2008-08-05 14:33:27
    夕阳美/April
    Excellent! Your voice is so sweet that I 've listened to it for three times.
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  • 2008-08-05 14:34:58
    Here
    Hi Marek, thank you for your limeric ;-)
    Wow, the tiger ate the lady?
    Your English is very good. Are you still learning English at school?
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  • 2008-08-05 14:40:14
    Here
    Thank you, April :-)
    You're very nice and I'm so lucky to be your friend.
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  • 2008-08-05 14:50:06
    Myrna
    You did it well!!! friends?? :-)
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  • 2008-08-25 22:38:21
    Dancing Bear
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    Overall your pronunciation is excellent.  I have a few small suggestions which may help.

    Your pronunciation of “l” is correct in most words but when you said “girl” I heard “gir.”  The final “l” in English presents more difficulty for Chinese speakers than does the initial “l.”  The English “l” differs slightly from the Mandarin “l” in that in English “l” is a continuant, a sound produced without closing the vocal tract completely.  The Mandarin “l” is more like a stop.  Try saying “call” and holding the “l” sound for a long time.  That would be close to the l” sound in “girl.”

    Since we link final consonants with following initial vowels, if you say “the girl‿ is,” that  is, if you pronounce it as the gir lis” you shouldn’t have any trouble.

    Likewise, we would link “the boys‿ are.”  It would sound like “the boy zar.”

    When you say “the man is” try to emphasize the “n” a little more and hold it a little longer. 

    Your pronunciation of the word “mirror” sounded like “mirrow.”  In the pronunciation of the final “r” the lips are not rounded and the tip of the tongue is retracted.  It curls back.  The “o” in “mirror” is pronounced like “ə,” that is, like the “a” in “about.”
    I’ll record my pronunciation for you.
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  • 2008-09-01 04:21:31
    Here
    Thank you so much, Dancing Bear :-)
    I practiced 'girl, mirror and man' for many times according to your record. I neglect the final 'l' quite often but now I'll remember it.
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  • 2008-09-06 03:01:28
    Awen
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    Here is speaking English perfectly. 你的中文名字是什么?
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