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Brief Introduction
Introduce yourself! Write a brief introduction. What is your name? Why are you learning a new language? Where are you from?
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guoyanyan

guoyanyan
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After the first 2 sentences, you apparently went on to a impromptu mini speech, and slacked off in grammar, as you concentrated on and struggled in vocabulary. You might want to consider pre-typing and editing a script. That's helpful for beginners.
I like your sentiment on how language learning facilitates friendship in the world, and its importance, etc.