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Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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hierbafresca
The lion is eating a great steak.The little fish scares the octopus. The soft sofa is waiting for fat John.This awsome giant were standing up in front of me.
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Submitted: 2008-08-11 19:44:42



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  • 2008-08-11 22:00:53
    inger
    This awEsome giant WAS standing up in front of me.
    Otherwise very good.
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  • 2008-08-12 00:56:29
    Eugenio
    Fine work with 1 problem.  It should read " a giant was standing up " .  Otherwise it was bery good. 
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  • 2008-08-15 23:23:17
    William
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    Very good except for the one error already noted.
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