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Vacation transportation
When was the last time that you went on a vacation? Did you go by car, airplane or ship? Where did you go?
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nooonaaa
nooonaaa
my last vacation was this summer ,i went to mersa matroh it's amazing place,i went by bus for 6hourse ,but i spent good time there.you must visit it.
Submitted: 2008-08-12 14:05:34
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Other Members' Submissions
Good, but you can improve even more. Instead of comma, you have to write a períod at the end of a sentence and capitalize the first letter qhen beggining another setence. :=)
Keep doing your good work.