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Describe a Holiday
Describe a popular holiday or event in your country. What is the name of the holiday? What day is the holiday? How many days does the holiday last?
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Natalie
Natalie
September 18th we celebrated the first board of government, this celebration is more know of independent day, generally we celebrate all the week
Submitted: 2008-08-12 23:59:43
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Notice that I changed the sentence structure.
On September 18th, we celebrate the first board of goverment . This celebration is more popularly known as the "Independence day." Generally we celebrate it a whole week.