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A Shopping Trip

Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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co co
Last sunday I went to shopping with my friends,I bought some lovely clothes and some fresh fruits.
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Submitted: 2008-08-13 08:53:17



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  • 2008-08-13 15:15:12
    niaz
    well down. it is very good.
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  • 2008-08-15 16:13:51
    mohammad
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    well down. It is very good.
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  • 2008-08-18 03:21:05
    Arvind
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    ....went for shopping . . . .

    one space after ',' (friends, I bought . . .)
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