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A Shopping Trip
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
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co co
co co
Last sunday I went to shopping with my friends,I bought some lovely clothes and some fresh fruits.
Submitted: 2008-08-13 08:53:17
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well down. It is very good.
one space after ',' (friends, I bought . . .)