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Transportation

What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?

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i use metro to get around town and i use to drive with my car on trips

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Submitted: 2008-08-13 10:15:56

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2008-08-13 13:21:22
MARY

I used to drive my car to go on trips.
Now I use the metro system to get around town.

YOU DID GOOD CONGRATULATIONS.
This is just another way to say the same thing you wrote.
Nice to hear from you again.
Have a blessed day
Mary

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2008-08-14 10:15:39
mdchaskar

How about constructing two different sentences instead of joining them.

Good try.
Keep it up.

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2008-08-23 12:56:41
cheyanne

"I used to go on trips by car" may be better i think.

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2008-08-23 12:56:57
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