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Describing People

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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Eyecatcher4me
The man is tall and thin. The woman is young and rich. The boy is short and fat. The girl is thin and poor. I am a man and I am short. You are tall and rich.
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Submitted: 2008-08-13 15:53:10



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  • 2008-08-13 16:42:59
    isabella
    Perfection!
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  • 2008-08-14 07:10:02
    lavis
    it's ok
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  • 2008-08-14 12:00:33
    zhraa
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    perfect

    But here : I am a man and I am short
    This is right , but (I am a short man ) is better.

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  • 2008-08-15 15:54:23
    ejennin
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    Ausgezeichnet!
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  • 2008-08-20 00:17:33
    kelmarz
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    Perfect! Keep it up!
    ~kel :)
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