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• 2008-08-14 11:26:53

  kelin
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  Super good job!  The only thing I see you need to correct is the space after the period when you began the second sentence.

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• 2008-08-14 12:56:20

  Jan
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  Good job!
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  I usually walk with my parents at the park after I had dinner. I like playing badminton and swimming. I also like reading books and newspaper.
  
  Jan

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• 2008-08-14 19:41:04

  David
  

  Good,  a few comments,  you usually walk IN the park because you are IN the park when you are walking, unless you walk around it.
  reading books and  [a] or [the] newspaper
  you cannort say reading newspaper
  
  

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• 2008-08-15 04:48:32

  piggy
  

  In the park, I usually walk with my parents, and play badminton with my friends. When I get  tired of being physically active, I just sit on the grasses and read some books and magazines.  .  oink oink!!

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• 2008-08-30 09:14:40

  Aby
  

  Hey Dora,im here late.I have been in Beijing and was far from a computer but now im glad for your having so many good friends here helping your English.Follow them.Keep it up.
  
  Aby

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• 2008-08-30 10:41:25

  Dora
  

  Thanks a lot~~~
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• 2008-09-26 19:29:45

  nerminfgr
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  good work.

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• 2008-09-28 13:42:51

  lillian
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  Please correct the space after the period when you began the second sentence.
  

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