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How many objects?

Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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Leon
the girl have twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
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Submitted: 2008-08-14 14:55:03



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  • 2008-08-14 17:08:46
    honge
    The girl has twenty five flowers and seven candles.
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  • 2008-08-14 22:42:04
    傑佛瑞
    That's good, but it's:

    The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles. 
     
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  • 2008-08-14 23:32:34
    doveign
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    The girl HAS 25 flowers and 7 candles.
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  • 2008-08-15 00:11:32
    karawan
    You have not completed the assignment because you repeated the example given. Perhaps you would consider re-submitting?
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  • 2008-08-15 02:32:25
    SiGe
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    你又忘了一般现在时态的第三人称单数为主语时,谓语动词的形式变化了。这个时候应该在谓语动词后面加s,这里的谓语动词是have,它的变化形式应该是has。所以,句子应该是:

    The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

    还有,在英文书写过程中,每句话的每一个字母是要大写的,这和标点符号一样,是英文方法的一部分,不能错的。
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  • 2008-08-15 09:09:29
    傑佛瑞
    The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
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  • 2008-08-27 08:10:30
    Mini
    “have”在第3人称用“has”。
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  • 2008-08-27 08:11:55
    Mini
    The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
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