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At the café.

Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?

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lucky girl
my favorite drink is coffe. No ,i 'm a vegetarian
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Submitted: 2007-10-12 12:41:26



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  • Diana - 2007-10-13 00:41:26
    very good lucky girl : )
     
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  • Orien - 2007-10-13 05:39:23
    Very good. Just a bit correction, remember to always begin a sentence with capital letter, and to always capitalise 'I'. ;-)
     
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  • Ricardo C. - 2008-04-17 14:16:40
    Just a couple of corrections:

    "My favorite drink is coffee. I am a vegetarian so I do not eat ham sandwiches, for example"
     
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