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Describing the weather

Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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crabkit
The weather for five days are always raining, so Thai people need an umbrella very much because it's easy to keep into our bag. However, I want more sweater than umbralla because our office is very cold.
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Submitted: 2008-08-16 11:21:30



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  • 2008-08-16 16:20:32
    reda amin
    good,,but,,(thai) that okay,,and I think you don't used the umbralla in your office,,right but you say I want to more clothes,,,
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  • 2008-08-17 06:00:43
    crabkit
    It's confusing for my writing.
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  • 2008-10-25 10:11:30
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