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Favorite Meal
Describe your favorite meal. What are the ingredients used to prepare the meal?
Author:
john
john
I have just written something about my favorite meal,so I will
tell you something about my favorite sport.
Swimming is my favorite sport,especially in the sea where there
are bright sun,golden sands and blue water.Swimming can get
me all exciting senses.When I am in my primary school,I enjoy
playing with water and at that time my father taught me how to
swim.first breaststroke then free-style.I was looking forward to
summer though I felt bored for its hot weather.
Submitted: 2008-08-16 17:51:41
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Other Members' Submissions
Well written and good detail. When talking about past events, use the past tense.
Excellent submission. Just use the past tense for events that have already occurred. Like when you were younger. Bigi made the same corrections I would make so I won't repeat them. You have an excellent grasp of the English language.
This was a nice story though.