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Describing the weather

Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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gabisinha
todau is raining and is cold.Tha woman need of de raincoat and a umbrela.
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Submitted: 2008-08-16 23:43:43



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  • 2008-08-24 10:01:31
    juli
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    Today it is raining and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

    Here are some tips:
    I need
    you need
    he, she, it needs
    we, you, they need (plural)

    You have to write "an umbrella" because umbrella begins with a vocal. Other examples: 
    a nose, a mouth
    an eye, an ear

    Try again!

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