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At the café.
Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?
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Giulio
Giulio
I go a few times at week in a cafè. However when i go I drink fruit juice or a beer. Depends to the hour that i go. When I choose a snack I prefer desserts. :D
See you later with other exercices XD
Submitted: 2008-08-17 08:28:11
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I go a few times a week to a cafè. I usually drink fruit juice or beer, depending on the hour. When I have a snack I prefer deserts.
This is a good attempt. I did understand what you were trying to say. Have a look at what I have written below, this might help with how you could structure this answer.
I go to the cafe a few times a week. I might order a fruit juice, or a beer, but this will depend on the time I go to the cafe. I prefer desserts, so will choose this as a snack.
A very good try, just a few small mistakes :-)
"I go a few time A week TO a cafe." Or "I go to a cafe a few times A week."
There's a little bit about semi-colons, too, but we can talk about that later. Lastly, keep in mind that the first person singular in English "I" is always, always, always capitalized no matter where it appears in a sentence. Good to hear from you again. R
"I go a few times A week TO a cafe"
The personal pronoun "I" always has a capital irrespective of where it appears in the sentence. The other pronouns - you, we etc, are only capitalised at the start of the sentence.
Join the 2nd & 3rd sentences to make just 1 sentence, by saying "or a beer, DEPENDING ON the hour..."
Otherwise exceelent work
Ciao e a presto
Iain
"I go a few times A week TO a cafe"
The personal pronoun "I" always has a capital irrespective of where it appears in the sentence. The other pronouns - you, we etc, are only capitalised at the start of the sentence.
Join the 2nd & 3rd sentences to make just 1 sentence, by saying "or a beer, DEPENDING ON the hour..."
Otherwise excellent work
Ciao e a presto
Iain
"I go a few times A week TO a cafe"
The personal pronoun "I" always has a capital irrespective of where it appears in the sentence. The other pronouns - you, we etc, are only capitalised at the start of the sentence.
Join the 2nd & 3rd sentences to make just 1 sentence, by saying "or a beer, DEPENDING ON the hour..."
Otherwise excellent work
Ciao e a presto
Iain
Nice work.
I agree with tlaw's comments, but the commas need to be added in these places.
drink, fruit, or beer
Other than that I would have written it like tlaw. Good job!