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Your Family
Describe your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters? Are they older or younger?
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john
john
My family lives in Nanning in China.There are 4 members in my family.
They are my father,my mother,my sister and I. My father is tall and
a little fat.He is a handsome man.He is very busy because he is a
businessman.My mother is a businesswoman and she also cooks very
well.My mother likes watching TV,running and playing badminton.My
sister is a lovely girl and she is very independent.She likes travell very
much.This summer holiday we went to many famous scenic spots
in China and took a lot of photoes.We enjoyed this holiday very much
I am a university student now.I love my family and my family loves me
really.
Submitted: 2008-08-17 15:45:48
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My family really loves me.
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My family lives in Nanning, China. There are 4 members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and myself. My father is tall and slightly fat, but he is a handsome man. He is a very busy business man. My mother is a businesswoman, and she also cooks very well. My mother enjoys watching TV, running and playing badminton. My sister is a lovely girl who is very independent. She likes to travel very much. This summer we visited many scenic spots in China and took a lot of photos. We enjoyed this family vacation very much. I am a student now, attending university. I love my family and my family loves me. (If you want to add emphasis, you can say "my family loves me very much". If you want to use the word really, it should follow after the word family like so "my family really loves me.") Tai hao la :)