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Describing Objects

Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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ravesandhowls
La rosa en el florero esta sobre la mesa. Hay 50 gusanos en la caja. Ewwwwwwww! La rosa ruboriza.
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Submitted: 2008-08-19 01:20:54



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  • 2008-08-19 02:08:03
    erreserre
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    Bien!! Algunas correcciones.
    La rosa DEL florero esta sobre la mesa. Hay 50 gusanos en la caja. Ewwwwwwww! La rosa SE ruboriza.
    Sigue Adelante!!
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  • 2008-08-19 04:02:28
    Salomón
    Good, keep going
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  • 2008-08-19 15:00:07
    marta
    Hola: Mejor decirlo así:
    El florero que está sobre la mesa, tiene una rosa.
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  • 2008-11-15 02:41:26
    CLEOPATRA
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    Sobre la mesa hay un computador, tambien hay un cuaderno. En la caja hay unos libros mios.
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