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Clothes Shopping

Mrs. Smith went shopping yesterday. She wanted to buy a new dress and a present for her son. She looked at many different dresses. She did not like the yellow dress or the blue dress. She decided to buy a red dress. She paid about 200 dollars for it. She did not know what to buy her son. She looked at some sweaters, shirts, and pants. She looked at a new soccer ball, but she didnt buy it. Instead, Mrs. Smith bought her son a new watch.

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khan
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Submitted: 2007-11-27 13:49:11



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  • 2007-11-27 14:23:21
    Erik.
    Congratulations on having completed this speaking exercise, this is quite well done!  You have not made any major errors here, but I suggest working on the following points so as to perfect your spoken English: (1) The overall intonation and rhythm, because there was a certain amount of hesitation.  Best of luck with your future studies!
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