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Sun Safety - Time

In the summer, the sun can be dangerous. It is important to protect your skin when you are outside. You must use sunscreen every two hours. The sun is stronger after 10am, and is the strongest between noon and 4pm. You can get a sunburn in only 15 minutes. Some people go to the beach and sleep in the sun. When they wake up, they have a bad sunburn. Sometimes, people with bad sunburns need to go to the hospital.

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Dora
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Submitted: 2008-08-20 12:38:57



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  • 2008-08-20 13:23:42
    Celia
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    That is pretty good, Dora!:D
    In the summer should be corrected like this----In summer;
    You must use sunscreen---- You must use suntan oil;
    and is the strongest---- and it is the strongest;
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  • 2008-08-20 13:35:06
    David
    Very well spoken.
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  • 2008-08-20 18:39:37
    kelin
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    Really good.  As you practice I think you will speak with a more natural rhythm.  Very good.
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  • 2008-08-21 06:30:06
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  • 2008-08-21 10:22:56
    dmcgimpsey
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    Nice Job.  Keep up the good work.
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  • 2008-08-29 12:35:19
    Dora
    Thanks a lot~~
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  • 2008-09-03 18:04:53
    Aby
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    Good job really!
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  • 2008-09-26 19:27:34
    nerminfgr
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    good job.
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